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I wish I could blend with the air

then I'll glide without a single care

Free from the black hole consuming my soul,

ceasing the decomposition of my control.

I would add to the elements of the atmosphere

The grains of me invisible, but still remaining here,

blending in into the unseen but complex air

blowing my spirit through halos of various hair.

Someday, I'll be an element of our vital air

blowing through this destructive world without a care,

feeling so peaceful and serene,

interlacing into the breeze like an seam.

you'll breathe parts of me and not even recognize

that a piece of me was inhaled.

And you'll continue to not identify

The delicate element of me,

fitting like a puzzle in the sky.

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Bravisimo! Excellent! Superb! You have a gift for words, mon ami.

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Wow. What a powerful piece. Bravo, bravo.

Poem open for comments and critiques? Please???

WOW! AWESOME! VERY GOOD! I LIKE IT!