Monday, May 7, 2012

Hello all, hope ya'll are having a good one...Read if ya like???

Fare skin glistened in the light



Long charcoal hair bounced in the wind



Belly with child, breast swollen with milk



Never any words to describe such beauty



Humility in eyes once filled with truth



Nurturing and fragileness in every fingertip



Amazing touch of healing filled with grace



All lost in a maze for power and fame



Lies, deceits, foul words displayed in a game of dog eat dog



Vanity masks her thoughtlessness in glory



Obtaining unbending riches for addictions never fulfilled



Jewels, diamonds unending for a piece of body no longer pure nor caring



Fare skin no longer glistens in light but urges to be in the dark



Potent stench of sexual immorality is her perfume



Whore is tattooed on her forehead



No longer nurturing, no longer pure she hides amongst us



Everyone tucks her away as their own no one will give her up



Child born alive but dead for the future holds none for it has nothing.



Hello all, hope ya'll are having a good one...Read if ya like???

It's written at a 13-year-old level. Unfortunately, the subject matter calls for a more mature writer.



Upon further review, and additional information from the writer, I stand corrected. The writer is clearly not 13 yet.



Hello all, hope ya'll are having a good one...Read if ya like???

sounds good but my opinion is not the best i am not good with poetry.



Hello all, hope ya'll are having a good one...Read if ya like???

And your question is?



Hello all, hope ya'll are having a good one...Read if ya like???

vote for ronnie.

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